OK - I dud some changes. This am basically a final draft:
This is what I think the Extended Pizza Network is most useful for - getting feedback. That's how it were conceived, right? Plus, I'm really quite way into seeing projects at different stages so you can clearly understand what choices the creators was making. That are in a way more interesting than the finished product, methinks. I also worked that into Perceival - the waverly voice at the begin is actually the recording I made when I woke up yesterday morning and instead of taking a shower I think of this song and record it. Then at the end there is a fully realized version of the song. That has nothing to do with this project really.
Anyway, I don't mean to be a space hog. But I'll be right back at you with the blog I'm putting together special for Perceival.
Anyway, I'd really like to hear - do the changes make it better or worse? Are there any issues that need attention?
Thanks a million.
2 comments:
Nice fonts. It looks really nice. I like the sounds you have during the animation. And the music at the end is very cheery and good. I had trouble reading the text at the end. I needed to watch it a couple times. I think it goes a little too fast. makes it feel a little rushed.
OK. I'll try to slow it down a bit. I kind of realize that I need to, but it's hard cause things all get locked in, so even small changes become national emergencies.
Anyway, thanks.
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